All Comments on 'Best Spring Ever Ch. 01'

Great story. After that build up there better be a ch. 2.

Chapters 2-8 are pending approval.

loved it hope next is soon

Looking forward to Chapter 2.....

Hot “5” for me!

Starting to heat up! Without further ado on with the show!

Oh, 5 stars! Probably wont help with your score but wont lower it either. Well done to this point.

Cheers

SAGE

Excellent. You’re developing a delightful story, pointing in promising directions. We know what is going to happen without, at this stage, overdoing the gratuitous sex. I’m looking forward to reading Chapter 2, and subsequent explorations of this families’ interactions. Well worth all five stars, more if they were available.

Excellent warm up. Chapter 2 looks like a hot one.

5*

BJ

Great set up, but to end it where you did was just criminal!

Try reading the next chapter

Excellent. Loving. Consensual. Nasty.

Very disappointed that the author would stop a promising story just as it was getting interesting. 3 stars for poor story breaks. Anony Mous