All Comments on 'Best Visit to the Strip Club, Ever'

by Daemonero

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice Start

I hope you will continued the story, so we can read what happens next??

SWT3SWT3over 6 years ago
Hot Start

You have talent. Keep going. Give us more. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

What I'm wondering is "what was the topic of the class project." Not!

FormerReaderFormerReaderover 6 years ago
Hot

I think it's a common fantasy for guys, but you did a great job! I also would like to see stories about their ongoing relationship if you are willing.

DaemoneroDaemoneroover 6 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments everyone, even the weird one about the cucumber... This was my absolute first time writing any kind of story so I hadn't really thought about writing another. I'm sure I will at some point, but I think I'll leave this story arc up to the readers' imagination as to where it leads after this. If it helps, as I was writing this I imagined them having more than just a sexual connection and could absolutely see them continuing a relationship.

On a separate note, I welcome any constructive criticism.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Interesting story

Miranda could have given him a private lap dance at his apartment and saved $200.

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 6 years ago
Always wanted to work in a strip club

This has been something I’ve wanted to do for a long time xoxoxo Annette

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What a turn on

You need to write a follow up to this because 💦💦💦💦💧💧💧

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story! Not so much for realism but man, having a classmate who admits a crush and admits her secret job at a strip club, then secretly slips her pussy over your aching erection during a lap dance, OMG I'm there!! I hope you write more!

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