All Comments on 'Bet, The'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

That was a fun romp. Hope there is a part 2.

MiniwandMiniwandabout 2 years ago

It was... weird. It happens so fast it's unrealistic. But the story was very good still. The premise was funny and the sex was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow! Good one. Deserves a next episode.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good one. Dad will be doing the lawn work for a while....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Have her end up pregnant!

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceabout 2 years ago

"Actually, Dad, I think we *all* won."

"Huh?"

"Well, you'll have me do all your yardwork for a month. Win for you."

"Uh huh..."

"Mom got five pretty good orgasms. Win for her."

"Um..."

"And I'm pretty sure I'm going to be having a lot more sex with mom from now on. Win for me."

MarkT63MarkT6312 months ago

Dad is a cuck??

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I am writing a part two to April Fool, so I have submitted an edited version of the first part fixing some bad dialogue and grammar. The story is that same only with phasing differences and corrections to things that didn't make sense originally. I did finally come up with a ...