All Comments on 'Beta Testing'

.....about this story, besides the hot, hot erotica, was how realistic you wrote your characters and their interactions. Humor and believably adult dialogue give this story depth and personality.

I'm quite partial to stories featuring sexy nerds and hot erotica writers. Very engaging plot and hot interactions.

I mean...what the HECK does .Net WebServices have to do with a Love Machine fer cryin out loud! Now Real-Time llibrary calls and device driver interfaces would make sense for coding a Love Machine, but WebServices?? Those are like the totally direct opposite sort of thing...and utterly useless for controlling that sort of electronica.

About all you could do would be to pump out telemetry data, but who would want that sort of telemetry broadcast out to the Internet? It would not be very interesting data.

So, IMO somebody wasn't doing their research properly in this regard.

(snork!)

;-)

A good story that needs to continue. The negative comment about the technical descriptions on the white board was being pretty picky as it was scene setting and not specifically important to the story.

Loved it - fun and different, well characterized. Really looking forward to future efforts. Welcome!

We'll written with good pacing. The storyline allows for expansion and a sequel. Keep it up ( pun intended )

Your writing was delicious. The characters were ultra - realistic. And oh! what I wouldn't give to have a Milt of my own.

But leaving me with a cliffhanger like that when all I wanted was to know all the juicy details of what Milt preformed like. You are cruel!

Keep up the amazing work. I love your character development!

Great story, but it needs a sequel to be complete.

Great story!