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All Comments on 'Beth Has a Taste of Magic'

by Lizzy_Beth_26

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Revrnd09Revrnd09about 18 years ago
Nice job!

Good job!

Nice follow up on the first part. Got a little confusing on the pronouns in the first stoy, but overall well done!

Keep on writing!

hyulhyulhyulhyulhyulhyulabout 18 years ago
Good writing and interesting characters

Good story and very well written. I'm looking forward to Beth taking part in the CPs. Will it happen?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Damn, that is hot!

When is the next part of the story coming? This story caused me to get my own vibe out of the drawer.

Nice job Liz.

liz33ndliz33ndover 6 years ago

I read thru this story, but got lost somehow.

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