All Comments on 'Beth is Taken Ch. 01: The Seduction of Bethany'

It just doesn't get better than this. I hope to see more in the future.

One of the best I have read!!! Keep it up.

....nothing was mentioned about birth control. Doesn't this guy worry at least a little about getting a teenager pregnant?

This is a disgusting story about a man who was to be driver to her prom who instead fucked a young girl and filled her with his cum.

You are an abusive, nasty bastard.

Kind of a rapey mofo, aren't you?

Now 9 months later is she a teenage Mum

Wow

A have been a member for a very long time and you story is definetly one of the top 3 i have read. Keep them comming!!

I liked how were able to bring life to the story - well written

Great story really a good read. KEEP UP THE GOOG WRITING.

5 stars for the slow build up.

Also, we were late to the prom and it had ended by the time we got there.

please continue abigail’s story

Well, simply the best seduction of a girl by a man that I have ever read. It was so hot and the detail of the minute by minute exploitation of Beth was fantastic and beautiful. We don't know who this guy is and what kind of relationship he has with the family. All we know is that he has a big car and can seduce Beth like someone that has done this before. I have not checked for additional chapters but would love to know what happens the rest of the night and the next morning. Will there be any regrets or will he take Beth down a long path to humiliation and degradation? Will he make her into a good woman that will love life, or will he make her into a slut? Still, probably the best detailed seduction of a woman written in a long time. Few authors are in this category.

The hymen is at the mouth of the vagina, not deep inside

Extremely well written,