All Comments on 'Beth Vacation Ch. 02'

You need help in writing these stories. You should proof read them before entering them. Try again once you get better!

Good story content...really bad editing. Lost me with the his and hers in the wrong place.

Please go back to school. This was bad!!!!!!!!!!!

First paragraph; 4 grammatical errors (or more). I couldn't get beyond them.

Get yourself a freaking editor. Or learn to write. Whatever.