All Comments on 'Beth's New Life Ch. 02'

I really enjoy pony girl stories but this just doesn't reach me. The origin story in Ch. 1 isn't BDSM, sad but it happens too often here. But in this whole part 2 Beth/Autumn has simply accepted it. No description what she feels, why she isn't more surprised about the male ponies etc.

Agreed, Beth/Autumn puts up nearly zero resistance and there is no time spent on her internal feelings or outward reactions to anything except the dildo making her horny and a brief moment when her brother gets a bj. A story like this would greatly benefit from a first person pov or third person singular. Pacing is another issue, I feel a lot is introduced too quick and back to the first point no time is spent with Beth's reactions to the events unfolding.