All Comments on 'Beth's Tattoo'

Would have been a 5 star story except the poor grammar kept detracting from the buildup. Would just get on a roll reading it when another error would appear like a red light. The story was good and, with a little editing, could be much better.

5 stars

After having a lot of fun with my own sister for many years I can see how this could come about. But it takes a special kind of sister that will accept the fact that fucking her brother will be the best sex she ever has. Once a sister get this into her head I doubt they can find better elsewhere. Incest is best.

I really don't give a shit about poor grammar or mistakes. The story line is what interest me. I want a story not just sex. Just sex stories gets the lowest ratings from me. They are over the top boring.

I would like another chapter please