All Comments on 'Betrayal: Smoke Implies Fire'

It was a wild, very sexy ride, with the reluctant "victim" wanting it all along.

Stories where the protagonist is an idiot do little for me. 👎

I cant explain why but I easily identify with Joan. Trying to maintain but giving in to the domination and demands of the men in her life can make dynamic changes in a woman's. Her urges and her need to please surpass her other needs.

how stupid do you really have to be?

I’m perverted and nasty enough to think this is a hot story. My emotions went up and down several times feeling very sorry for her then feeling my sexual aggression rise, I am a male. Knowing a submissives secrets gives you incredible control and power over them and is intoxicating. I can see everything happening as written.