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All Comments on 'Better Alive Than Dead Ch. 002'

by Carnalia

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Bravo!

Please keep writing! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More encore!

Same, this story and characters have potential and I also would eagerly welcome more soon!

Crusader235Crusader235over 4 years ago
Good

Really good start. Love the space characters you've developed. On to reading more. Four Stars.

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Aspiring writer. This is my first self-published story, and I hope you like it. Advise, critique, praise etc. is very welcome. I always strive to be better! Thanks for reading! xoxo I also launched a Patreon, for those who wish to be part of the extended universe, or just w...