by MsQuote
Sorry but reads like a drunk writing about a drunk, had to read it twice but still think it is rubbish.
Hey, don't get hung up on comments like one below, he's read all 5 chapters and then said that! That just doesn't make sense to me. If he didn't like it why didn't he quit reading with chapter 1? I think it looks like you've got one or two haters who are giving you a lot of flak and voting down your story, because in my opinion you should be getting higher scores. I think you've definitely got something and I hope you continue as I for one would like to see how this story ends. Obviously the hater does as well or they wouldn't STILL be reading! Well done, I'm hooked!