All Comments on 'Better Off Dead'

and now a "Poor Soul" leaves to find a better place. TK U MLJ LV NV

I am into the genre and enjoyed your excusion into it

a few more sub plots and a few more colorfull characters,it would be a basis for a tv movie

Would have Loved the Drama and Back Stabbing.

I liked the Story Alot!

Sorry that it took me so long to find it and praise it! It was my grand-daughters' birthday parties separated by 10000 kilometers. I only got to one!

This was truly enjoyable because of the slow buildup and all the details. Thanks!

and where was the fat man in all this and the black bird?

Loved the twist and turns, reminded me of Joe Friday and Dragnet, just couldn't stop till the very end.

You gave away the plot too soon, otherwise enjoyable.

Great read thanks for sharing.

Great job and very enjoyable. it did make me think of Sam Spade with a hint of Perry Mason, thanks.

I noticed a few typos, just enough to bother a bit.

I've read some of your other work and find it fun and enjoyable, keep 'em coming.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this yarn.

...will not stay together.

Any longer then it takes

to give each other alibis,

bury the bodies

and split the loot.

Or is it?

I s there a seminal Pretty Good story yet to be read here?

They are fun - thanks -

I just finished reading another great story of yours. Thank you for sharing it with us..

we are all not really living anyhow. TK U MLJ LV NV

Chur bro awesome story

I love these "tough guy" PI stories!

Enjoyed

Great lines and nice unfolding story

Skank: "Do you want some of this?" MC "No. I gave it up for Lent." 5 Stars just for that line. Completely cracked me up. Thanks for that.