All Comments on 'Better Than It's Ever Been'

Finally, we have a winner! This is, indeed, a Valentine's Day story. Only, I had to down grade you, just a tick because your writing is in a word...stiff.

It doesn't flow. This story could have been so much better if you just relaxed and you removed yourself from the story, as the writer, and allowed your characters to tell it.

Give it a try. Blank your mind, think of your characters, now write. See?

Good job.

~ Imp (Alessia Brio)

Very charming story. No surprises, but it nicely captures a sense of Valentine erotica.

Don't liston to the 'grinch' "SEE" because he can't see anyway {blind man}by birth.!! Great story and should be one of the top 3 on here for the contest so far.! GREAT STORY. Thanks.

Although it was slow to start I thought the sex was hot and steamy. Very well done.

At last, a Valentine's Day story I can give a full 5 points. A good read, very touching. Wonderful to read a story in which the characters get it right, are good people, and love each other incredibly. Good job!

thanks for this story, i really enjoyed it, its well written, very romantic and sensual... i hope this story will be the winner!!!

Beautifully done

Capturing the way we drift apart and what can bring us back together

Outstanding

wow that was realy great. An awesome valentine day storied. I really do hope you win and the best part is theyr married and they realy love each other.