All Comments on 'Better than We Were'

More please, hot sexy story and I wonder where this could go especially if he fills her young pussy with cum.

Beautiful story- the sex feels so natural that it almost sneaks by you. It is expected given the genre but the transition was nicely done

Excellent. Hot erotic.

I hope you continue with this story. 5stars

More please!

WOW!

Your progression seemed so smooth and natural. I have always thought it easy to write a ‘fuck’ story where the characters are banging by the end of the first page. It takes more creativity and talent to write a story that explains the ‘why’ they end up doing what they reluctantly have to but also what they need / want to.

Can’t wait to read more of your stories!!!!

And Thanks.

It's pretty obvious that Alana was in on it. Would enjoy seeing this developed more, but it's an excellent story.

Wow, after knowing the genre, I thought this would be just another cringey story. BUT, but when I read this was something different. I literally almost cried in the first page and a few times throught, and at the end I felt good about them having sex. I LOVED IT....

Whew. It took awhile for dad to overcome his conscious, but when he finally did.....Dino-mite! Was wishing you could have somehow worked Alana into the prose. Oh well, can't have everything I guess . . . . .