All Comments on 'Betty's Story'

Really nice.

Languid, limpid and lively!

Great story, and OMG you were able to write it without any 36 DDD breasts or 8 inch cocks. Bravo.

Beautiful

This I like!

Different but I'll give you 5 on that. Very interesting read. Thanks for sharing.

Cheers

SAGE

Thank you for participating in my event :-)

I really enjoyed this. By starting with Sarah and Jenn's discussion at the beginning and their brief closeout at the end, the main story had a good older-period vibe that it maintained throughout as the characters matured and eventually aged. Betty and Ginger had a great relationship that allowed their sessions to occur as sharing between them without jealousy and Bob and George had just the right take on it to allow it to continue and be successful for them. Most of all, the story played well to the Pink Orchid theme, allowing Betty to go as far as she wished but, being fortunate to be part of the right group, not feeling forced to go further, as was discussed at the end. Under other circumstances, she might not have been so fortunate. Great job,

Great story. Has real substance of relationships, warmth of real friends, goes very deep into enticement and excitement. Very real. Paints an awesome picture in my mind. Very down to earth. Keep writing, it's hard to find similar erotic stories that leave a lot for the mind to imagine. :)

I REALLY enjoyed that. It was sweet and loving and sexy. Terrific writing.

Lovely story about a special set of relationship. Well done!

You are truly an imaginative writer, I have read a half-dozen of your stories, and all have been original and easy to read.

You have a great way of developing your characters.

A beautiful warm loving story, well done.

A beautiful friendship and romantic love story between two loving couples. Excellent story