All Comments on 'Between Friends'

Wow, i loved this piece of literature. it got me so hot, i had to go and masturbate, and then find a sex partner. it made me so hot, it was sexy. really well done, i enjoyed it very much.

I'm a 50 y/o married woman, basically straight, but this story got me very hot!! Great writing, and I loved the audio!!

as a tale itself i would say it is normal. As an erotic tale/story it lacks the severity u need in added expression, all in all a 3 in the 1-10 area.. Oh and yes i write.

a good story and the author has a very sexy voice

Got me going, want to hear when Amber returns the favor....ummmmmmmmm

This story made me so horny, I could almost picture them. yummmmm

Not bad as far as the story goes but the reader's voice is too boring. It could be that there were not enough descriptive words to make reading it more interesting but I would say that it has more to do with the voice and / or the person.

If the story was read on it's own it would get a 3/10 the voice being so slow and so dull detracted frome the story somewhat and put it down to a 1/10. Because of this I gave it an average score of 2/10.

Its okay.....a bit on the boring side though. The voice was really a bore.

That was awesome!!! I couldn't keep my hands off my pussy. I was dripping wet, and had to finger myself while I read it.. Fabulous!!

I Love it , your voice was perfect for telling the story of two "friends" . I want to hear what happens next .. i couldn't keep my hands off my self .. i was dripping wet .. awesome job ... AlcuraDuvo

That was so very hot. My cock was hard from the start. I jacked off before I got half way thru and then read the other half and beat off again.......

I'm a 38 year old married woman. In college several years ago I had a friendship with a class auditor who is lesbian. Because of my hangups we never went beyond kissing and feeling each other with our hands, as much as we both wanted to. I have dreamed many times that I had been able to let it happen for me like the character in the story did and experience full intimacy. Reading the story brought back some wonderful memories and it got me very aroused. thank you!

Why can't we have a nude photo of you when you read the story.I would love to rub my pussy hearing the story and seeing you.

Love You.

Sylvia.XXX

Literotica

excellent story

yes to some of the comments. I enjoyed it but thought it could have been even better with a bit more time 'turning up the brightness'. and yes, voice modulation needed improving on the reading/audio - possibly reader had their head down to read not up? Can make a huge difference. When counselling, head down, when reading or selling (in this case the story) the head needs to be up.

Grimm

wish i had a friend like you! i'm reading and listening with my vibrator inmy pussy and i'm wishing i was there!

The story made me jealous of lesbians.

I was very turned on! My pussy was wet and I wished I was able to have that happen when I had the chance. I would love to have an encounter like that.

Still Hott!

i had to jerk off to this i mjust wish i was that woman

Loved the reading, girl. As a self confessed "male-lesbian" (I love to pleasure a woman with my mouth) I could picture myself right there. I might, however, suggest reading over it a few times before hand next time, might let the words flow off the tongue a bit easier. I noticed it started to as you got into the story. At first, it just sounded like you were reading it, then you started to put a bit more emotion in your voice. All in all, it was very good. With a bit more practice, you can read a hell of a story! I loved it! Keep them cuming!

that was amazing! i am a writer myself and i don't think i could have done a better job. and the narration made my cock throb in my pants as i wished i was there!

Wow! When i saw your picture in the bio I had to listen to it again. Of course i came again. I couldn't stop there so i returned to your photo and jacked off again my cock aching as i gazed at your breasts. I wish you could have watched. I would have loved to have you write about me as i jack off looking at you. it.

Thanks