All Comments on 'Between Friends'

by ShannonBlackwater

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dreamer3366dreamer3366over 7 years ago

Nice story with a climatic ending.

ShannonBlackwaterShannonBlackwaterover 7 years agoAuthor

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback!

Happy reading!

ElectricBlueElectricBlueover 7 years ago
Nice

A sweet little story.

I absolutely heard the final "ya" in my head!

Welcome to Lit, btw

OliverCOliverCover 7 years ago
Lovely.....

It takes me back to a simpler time in my pursuit of pleasure.

Well done Shannon!

ShannonBlackwaterShannonBlackwaterover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

I have truly enjoyed reading the comments left for me here and also the magic, secret ones which come to my email. 😊 I am currently working to tidy up another one I wrote many years ago and hope to post it soon. Thanks so much!

TheRealFlashTheRealFlashover 7 years ago
New Favorite!

Great story, ShannonB!!!

ChrisrovChrisrovabout 7 years ago
Amazing

I'm looking forward to your next storie...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Loved it.

I really enjoyed reading this story. Well written. Keep on writing :)

LaRascasseLaRascassealmost 7 years ago
Good story

Nice dialogue and build up the sex, including the brief flashback to Emma's previous amour. Well written, emotionally charged sex itself. Kudos to that. Overall, great going for a first effort.

wesleyfondawesleyfondaalmost 7 years ago

A lovely story and beautifully written. Thank you, Shannon.

ShannonBlackwaterShannonBlackwaterover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you so much for reading, voting and commenting! 😘😘😘

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrabout 6 years ago
So Hot

Very good read. Love the build up from a dare to the passion.

Good description of the background between these two.

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