All Comments on 'Between Siblings Ch. 02'

I uploaded the wrong version. I have multiple copies of my writing and this is the incorrect version. I expect the correct version to post in a day maybe two. Sorry for the mix up.

It was very, very hot. Can't wait to read the update, and future chapters

This version was HOT! Loved it.

Sometimes we are more critical of our work than other people are.

Keep writing!

That was HOT! Makes me wish I had a brother! Can't wait for the next chapter! :) (PM me if you still need an editor.)

Holy shit when does the next 1 come out.

If this the wrong version can't stand having to wait girl bring it on don't you dare stop writing thank you.

I can hardly wait for the next chapter this is a very hot story. I just hope that you make it hotter and longer because I love to read this type of story. So, please hurry up and write the next chapter

I've added you to my favorites, and I plan to keep an eye out for your work. I agree with the other comments. Sometimes it's easy to be TOO hard on yourself.

This is shaping up to be a very hot series and you shouldn't sweat the small stuff.

Enjoying the foreplay. Keep it up, these two need to fuck. Make it sensual the first time. You keep emphasizing her virginity and her big brother needs to be the one person she can trust to be gentle with her.

You built up a great story. You should finish it!!!

loved the story, you should finish it !!!!! LOVE how innocent lisa is and how in command chase is :)

Great story, Keep going!!!

wow-wwee loved it!

WOW. Enjoyed the story a lot. The brother's description of how he wanted to do her honestly gave me chills...and then some. lol

typical wannabe writer that lacks the brains to finish a story. it would have been better if you had WAITED until you had the whole story written out in rough draft BEFORE posting anything. as is you wasted our time and the sites space with a partial story. YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOURSELF.

Lisa's innocence is the clincher in this. She's so sweet (and sexy) and he's so sexy (and sexy!). Camilla is a skank, and for Chase to "do" her would be a major disappointment. But Lisa---That's perfect! Very sensual writing, and I think the pacing is just right and very believable. (BTW: are the 'rents really clueless?)

This story is HOT! Definitely agree with anonymous about the slutty sister. Please write another chapter.

Didn't like the way it was left. Hope there's more