All Comments on 'Between the Lines Ch. 02 - Camping'

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Zeuginv over 4 years ago

Great story

Please continue to write.

Dutch9290 over 4 years ago

Glad U are Back

Just sort stummbled onto your stories....and glad I did. Pretty well written and enjoyable...PLEASE KEEP WRITING !!...Don't know if that lovely little picture is a selfie or not...but, as I said.. very Lovely

EIoPolizei about 4 years ago

I actually like the story (would be better if u knew how to mark personal speech)but i think his wife is way to manipulative. Like she gets the 2 girl in bed with her husband (MC) and then still schemes behind his back and plays her game. It's like she planned everything of this and the MC is completely clueless.

Gives a really bitter aftertaste.

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I'm a bit shy writing about my adventures with my dad. Not sure if there's more to come, but I hope you enjoy it. One day I might write the story of the sleepover I had for my 18th birthday. No boys, just my best girlfriends and my cousin Maddie. And my dad and uncle. And Soph...

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