All Comments on 'Between the Lines Ch. 06'

by ikhneumon

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OnimpulseOnimpulseover 8 years ago
BEAUTIFUL!!!

What else can be said...this was and is an amazing tale of love and all that surrounds it!! I hope that you would continue...just hate to see this story ending any time soon..:)

ikhneumonikhneumonover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks, Onimpulse!

Best comment an author can hope to receive. Thank you!

daynedayneover 8 years ago
ENCORE

Please, sir, may I have some more?

I'm trying really hard to say something that hasn't already been said. Beautiful? Check. Touching? Check. Inspired? Check.

Your stories are simply wonderful. Absolutely LOVED reading Backstage Romance and Between the Lines. Are you planning to do anything with Tom and Shawn? Alex and Richard?

ikhneumonikhneumonover 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you, dayne!

So glad you enjoyed "Backstage Romance" and "Between the Lines"! My next (possible) project in that world actually centers on a character who's been referred to in passing in both stories, but hasn't yet made an official appearance in his own right: Daniel's older brother Kevin. I have a couple chapters of his story drafted, and I love writing in his voice (his personality is very different from Daniel's), but I haven't quite found a satisfactory plot outline yet to proceed in earnest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved loved loved it!

Stories like this always get me. I want them to go on, forever but also realize the ending was perfect. Maybe an epilogue though? I'm glad Larry found someone to love again

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Love it. I actually waited until it was completed to read it because I love your stories so much. It was worth the wait to read it all at once. I'm excited for your next project! I would also like a story or tom and Shawn. I just love your stories

ikhneumonikhneumonover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks, Anons 1 & 2!

Hmm, it seems Shawn and Tom have found some fans. I hadn't really considered giving them their own story—it would have felt to me too much like a rehash of "Backstage Romance"—but apparently readers feel differently. I suppose exploring what it was like for Shawn to work with Timothy prior to joining the Austin team could provide some interesting insights into both characters. Something to ponder… Thank you for reading and for the feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Encore!

I've just reread both stories and enjoyed them as much as I did the first time. Like the other readers commented, I would also love to read more about Daniel, Jeff, Doug, and Larry, and/or any of the secondary characters. Thank you for giving me this reading pleasure. Jeff

redhot93redhot93about 7 years ago
Was that the end

Please tell me this is t how it ends, I know it been more then a year but I hope this isn't the way the story ends and you will continue the story, please. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A beautiful lyrical sonnet of a lovestory

Such a Lovely, Lovely story! So sweet and endearing, the ending was both hopeful and wistful, making me want to know so much more about their future. It was a love story that truly felt awesome in the awe-inspiring mening of the word 😉

I Hope you will contiue Writing, you have a gift for it.

/Lavvy

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Goosebumps, laughter and, yes, tears. Hauntingly beautiful (pun intended) story. The cologne gave me chills every time. I'm left aching and wanting more Doug and Larry. Bravo Author, bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I have to cry every time I read this chapter. Ron is so beautiful and what Ron and Larry share is so wondrous and timeless. Bless their souls.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Can you write Larry's and Ron's love story? How they met, their life together in the theatric world, Ron's illness... their love and their mutual bond seems so strong and are so beautiful. Ron is so talented and his story deserves to be told.

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