by barefootgirl69
I really liked this story. You can really see the growth in your story telling from your older stories to this one. I really enjoyed the slow build between your two leads.
And I was caught by the twist at the end. Maybe I should have considered that, but I hadn't.
My reason for not going to 5 stars is that it was arousing me to the point that I wanted more. And that's a good thing. The end came up on me too fast. Perhaps have her lock up the library and then have them use the desk/table as she seemed to fantasize about.
Looking forward to future works.
Very enjoyable.
A long held wish list fantasy of mine.
I had my suspicions about the "twist" but it took nothing away from the the telling
A beautiful well written story! I feel that you are truly a gifted writer. I'll admit I wasn't expecting the twist at the end, but bravo, fooled me. I'm an empathic reader, I get more of the 'feel' of the story! I hope you write a continuation or sequel to this story.
Excellently written and I loved the build up and the ending. Sex in a public place is so hot!