by Momstheboss
the story was very good, but the English so poor (esp. in the beginning) that the overall is barely average. Too bad you don't have an editor.
I enjoyed the storey. Most of the time author's don't use dialogue. They just tell the storey. I like the way there is verbal interaction between the characters. The fact that the dialogue is soooo sexy and hot just adds to my enjoyment.
I'm 67. Where can I find a Beverly? Can we get her to move to N.H.?
"storey" = "story"
"author's" = "authors"
Illiterate twat
l read Drew's story this afternoon and got excited. l am 69 and can get it up sometimes when l read stories like this. l have a neighbour Jan who is 60 and does odd jobs around the street. We have always made suggestive remarks to each other and laughed together. This evening l was randy when Jan called and asked if there was anything l needed. l casually said a couple of hours in bed with you would be fine. She said Why not now and we went to my big double bed and we had a good few hours. l was able to keep it up in her for about an hour and she was well satisfied.
We are going to have a regular session as we are both single widowed people.
lf you want more then reply in this column. Ken