All Comments on 'Beware of Bridesmaids'

Dear Chrissy,

It was a shame you couldn’t make it last night. I stood in front of the mirror a long time admiring myself in your lingerie. Wondering if you would flow a river seeing me in it. Well if you still want to know what it looks like you have my room number. P.S. you can bring more lingerie too and make a fashion show.

Love your animal print wearing guy.

Love it

Dan, Dan the lucky man

Fun story but why didn't you go into the follow-up and get them together? I mean come on... You already had a page 2 would it have hurt to write page 3?

Really great story, but the end was kind of....blah... Not my kink I guess. Sounded like they had a fun evening.

Jean? I've got to wait to see what happens? You left me high, hard and and leaking...success! But I need to cum!

Left the door open for the next chapter.

This could be the start of an amazing story.

I think that she - SHE - climaxed too soon! she needs to take it slower and to follow up on this first chapter. They could both be so good together. Great story.