All Comments on 'Bex and the Brothers'

by CommanderBelpen

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Shouts for more . . . Punctuation.

As you proof read, feel you breath pause, or hesitate, and know the some form of punctuation is required.

You work is, otherwise, impressive and a joy to read.

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