All Comments on 'Bibi'

loved it.

The author continues to impress, with an interesting storyline and engaging characters. What a hopeful message that Bailey might become Bibi! The transition was made more believable by the way the author described her family. What a lovely fantasy/romance! Thanks.

Needs a second chapter!

Your writing has always been fabulous

Hallmark channel should option this for a movie…one of the best I’ve read in a long time

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!!!

Loved it. It made me laugh and brought a tear to my eye and even had me mad at the boy that was raping her. It does need a second chapter so we can see what happened to them both after college.

Very well written. Enjoyed it immensely. Agree, a second chapter would be nice. 5*+

Classic! One grew up understanding the nature of the love that lasts a lifetime, the other a classic brat despite great parents. The one who first gave love reaped the reward of sharing love, the other, from love received, came to understand and then practice such love. A very satisfying read for this

Lover of Romance.

A true romance that was a delight to read.

I could say that this whole tale was too good to be true, but in Literotica/Fantasyland things like this can happen. People can change for the better and they can learn new ways to live and be with others. And we, the readers, can enjoy the telling of such good things. I may become a permanent reader of the Romance genre and leave that pit of gloom, the LW genre for good. 5*

This is the first of your stories I have read. I'm looking forward to reading others. 👍

Great story and enjoyable read.

The power of romantic love!

5

One of your best and it had 5* until it finished with a truly lackluster finish. 4*

Very enjoyable. I love a happy ending. 5* from me.

A real pleasure to read. I truly enjoyed the characters. Bibi's growth and development was perfect. J.T.'s constant behaviour and love for Bibi was well crafted and completely believable. The parents were great too. Well grounded and complementary with each other's personalities. Thank you. K

Well crafted and written. A great romance but just a little too sweet for me at times although the thrashing he gave Taylor wasn't sweet at all but deserved. Still deserving of 5 stars.

Excellent! Could almost use another chapter. 5🦴🦴🦴🦴🦴

Nice! Very nice! Well written, flowed well!

At times, too sweet!

**** stars!

Burninglove

Good story! Perhaps a little too good to be true, but then this is the Romance section, so being a bit romantic is perhaps the whole idea….

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Nicely done, well written, well structured. Thank you

Great story and well written lots of possible adventure for the two as well as their family.

Great romance, with your usual touch of levity thrown in. Thanks! 5*

Well done. A good little redemption love story

Nice story. A little light on the conflict, perhaps, but... nice. For future stories, you might consider adding an external trial you force them to go through, something like a takeover bid, lawsuit, unfounded accusation, something with the potential to divide them. Just a thought...

Wonderful. At first I found it hard but then I got right into it and I started to get teary…. Something I rarely do on this site I am really impressed with this story and will read more of your writing. Well done Andrew

5. Anything I say would simply be parroting my other comments regarding your stories. I’ll just say, ‘Well done.’

Your creation is GREAT ! I had a difficult time putting it down, even for the shortest period of time !

THANK YOU !

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