All Comments on 'Bible Belt Bride Ch. 01'

Please find an editor to read through your submissions. It detracts from the story when you use poor grammar and downright incorrect words.

"...in pearl..." instead of "...in peril..."

A bit late with my comment, but I didn't even notice any grammatical errors, only an interesting story that undoubtedly really happens in the bible belt. Looking forward to Ch. 2.