All Comments on 'Big Brother's Best Friend'

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 5 years ago
so sad

he was a jerk and didn't even get her off, what was special to her wasn't special to him just getting a virgins cherry. big brother should kick his ass

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 5 years ago
VERY nice!

Deeply felt and honestly stated! All the best are!

You had me from the beginning...and you kept it developing throughout!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
No way

Wuld he pull out just shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

2knees2kneesabout 5 years ago
Sensational writing

I love your writing style and how you expressed what the characters were feeling. I could picture everything you wrote. I believe I am seeing the beginning of a truly great writer. Please, write more stories as I know so many would want to read them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

cute story until the end when she decided to take his firehose into her mouth.. A rough first tme experience but every women must learn what a cock and semen tastes like so better early than late .. It will get better. He walked out pretty pleased with himself as most boys would be in the situation..not a gentleman

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