by j_bakergal
he was a jerk and didn't even get her off, what was special to her wasn't special to him just getting a virgins cherry. big brother should kick his ass
Deeply felt and honestly stated! All the best are!
You had me from the beginning...and you kept it developing throughout!
Wuld he pull out just shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy
I love your writing style and how you expressed what the characters were feeling. I could picture everything you wrote. I believe I am seeing the beginning of a truly great writer. Please, write more stories as I know so many would want to read them.
cute story until the end when she decided to take his firehose into her mouth.. A rough first tme experience but every women must learn what a cock and semen tastes like so better early than late .. It will get better. He walked out pretty pleased with himself as most boys would be in the situation..not a gentleman