All Comments on 'Big Dick Fucks Blonde Girlfriend Pt. 05'

by EroticDelights

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
enough with the super short chapters

This story could be great, but the way you're releasing them is so frustrating. Wait until you've written about three pages worth before updating.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What a rip off!

Fuck that was lame man. Stop the lead up bullshit. I thought this was gonna be great, instead you have the guy run away. Fucking lame dude!

Shitty story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Amazing

FUCK these haters this was amazing I love it so much it's so realistic

EroticDelightsEroticDelightsabout 7 years agoAuthor
More coming

Thanks for the feedback. I understand the criticism that I'm not rolling the story out fast enough. In response I've made the next chapter a little longer, but understand that the story is about the protagonist's gradual acceptance of his particular kink. If we just fast forward to the sex, where's the fun in that?

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