by EroticDelights
This story could be great, but the way you're releasing them is so frustrating. Wait until you've written about three pages worth before updating.
Fuck that was lame man. Stop the lead up bullshit. I thought this was gonna be great, instead you have the guy run away. Fucking lame dude!
Shitty story.
FUCK these haters this was amazing I love it so much it's so realistic
Thanks for the feedback. I understand the criticism that I'm not rolling the story out fast enough. In response I've made the next chapter a little longer, but understand that the story is about the protagonist's gradual acceptance of his particular kink. If we just fast forward to the sex, where's the fun in that?