All Comments on 'Big Sister Summer Ch. 01'

More 5 star reviews. Also, iz gud? Plz tell me fangs.

What a depressing start to a story.

Ahaha his name is Le Coq!!! The story itself was pretty decent but went a little quick. You kind of zero to 100’d the sex stuff. There were some grammatical errors but I look forward to the next chapter.

Waiting for more.

Your imagination know no bounds, but your characters are OTT.. Stories need at least some resemblance to reality and this is like sci-fi... interesting but not quite making it.

Alright, for sure, thanks for the feedback. I guess part of the problem is that for awhile now, I've had this personal philosophy that most readers aren't really here to linger, so I've just tried to make each chapter as hot as possible. But I guess I really would like to try and write something that has a bit of a slower burn so, we'll see. But yes, thank you for the feedback. :)

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