All Comments on 'Big Sister Summer Ch. 02'

by deWynn

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trite_readertrite_readeralmost 4 years ago
Dildo Was Utterly Unnecessary

As a matter of fact, in this scenario specifically, it diminished the story. Made it less special between the sibs as far as I'm concerned. Dick sex first, toys maybe later.

Still, good story nonetheless.

Frankie1952Frankie1952almost 4 years ago

Wow, hot story. More please. I hope these two ladies are showing baby bumps by the time the parents return.

deWynndeWynnalmost 4 years agoAuthor
@trite_reader

Ah damn, I knew it was a bad idea lol. Yeah, while I wouldn't say it was a spur of a moment decision, the dildo scene ended up being added because I was afraid I needed something to add to the action. Next time these two get it on, there shall be no such nonsense then, at least of that sort. Thanks for the feedback! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

If I'd wonder whether this story, with its cartoon like characters, is a 3 or 2 star story, the dildo and ginger bread removed any doubt for the latter.

For my part you can spare yourself any more efforts to continue this story -- I'm off.

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LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 2 years ago

She liked Mr. Rose better than her brother. 2*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Pretty cool. Honestly I believe that every big sister should be taller than their younger brother

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