All Comments on 'Big U Pride Ch. 01: The Beginning'

That was hot. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

Wow that got me thinking

Loved it from start to finish please give me more soon xxx

That was extremely hot, and it gives me a new view on sex Tbh.

Really interesting story. The mental changes are really delicious. I can't wait to see the transformation

I loved the different approach about the seduction of Bri or Brit. It was highly erotic and I enjoyed this immensely.

I really enjoyed and appreciate the time you took to explore the logical reasoning the girls are using to explain their behavior to Bri/Brit and it's effect on his seduction!

Love this whole series, just got finished with Ch. 4!

Really well written, love the slow build-up and the emphasis on coercion... I think the next installments will be all the hotter for having taken your time at the beginning like this!

Just finished this first chapter and I can’t wait to read more. The prologue really set up the slower pace of this chapter. It was the hot promise of even more to come. Very well done!

Love how you have the characters working through a logic tree as the backdrop and catalyst of the transformation.. the contrasting perspective on the slut shaming phenomena you detail here is one all young adults and beyond should be exposed to.

Thank you for not playing into the cliche of simply guy calls girl slut, girl gets mad, guy says sorry, she doms him, the end. Instead you give readers a chance to open their eyes to a new POV and learn something. Whether they agree w Lana or don’t, and even though they know she’s got ulterior motives for Bri, it’s hard to fight that logic! Bravo friend, looking forward to more

This is one of the higher quality, more detailed stories in this genre. It's somewhat original and more positive portraying sluts/sissies as having power and enjoying submission, though it's definitely kinkier when they get tricked/coerced into being sluts and then enjoy it. Looking forward to the next chapters!

A good story in need of a basic spellcheck and proofreading

A good story in need of a basic spellcheck and proofreading

Wow that sweet sweet boy got an advanced introduction to Slut 101. Great story so far!