All Comments on 'Bikers Ride Free - Love Your Body'

Fun story. I hope we'll see more of Tannah and Greg.

Thanks DG 🙂

Fabulous! What a great entry to the competition. You've got my vote Dg and five stars to go with it. Any chance of chapter 2? The step-daughter sounds very intriguing!

A triumph of intimacy...so nice of the writer to allow us to see in...NK

Great happy little tail to warm the heart. Thank you we can all use some happiness from time to time.

Question though: "He soaped his hands with my jasmine-scented body soap and proceeded to start with a neck rub, across my shoulders, and down my arms." How cum your "body soap" was already in Greg's shower if you hadn't seen all his apartment yet? 😉😍

Just kidding! Love your stories please keep writing. Your naughty mind brings us, your fans, much pleasure!

Cheers

SAGE

PS: Good luck in the competition! I know who I'm voting for!

Great story! It all seems so authentic and made me feel like it was totally true. I'm betting that a high percentage is true, honey. My only disappointment was that I wasn't right there in the midst of the Nude Day Celebration. Admittedly, I would have loved viewing all the nude bodies, revealing their cocks, tits and, of course, hot pussies. Now, I know there was no sex playing, but the eye candy would be arousing for me, for sure. My cock would be hard and standing at attention all day long. I wonder how many (guys and girls) would enjoy viewing my dickmeat throughout the day. Who knows, maybe I could take someone home with me for the fun in the sack time. I'm not particular. I'll gladly take a woman (old or young) or a guy (again, old or young). Hell, maybe I could take both and have an awesome 3some with them. Thanks for getting my old, slutty, perverted mind going so well. Loved the story!!!

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

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Great that you are keeping the focus on the contest's theme, not wandering off into the weeds of a more thorough "relationship building" story.

Of course, if you wanted to continue the tale, there's plenty of room and hints in the character development to let you run free.

Always happy to read more from Daddysgirlfl.

Happy story build on an excellent idea and I loved the ending.

loved the story hope there's more chapter's to come

Terrific story. Really good ending.

I rated this story 99 out of 100 for the following reasons 1 first story to actually be about nude day 2 a great story with a lot of humor 3 I want more of them during the marriage and tannah meeting the step daughter's

Great reading loved it

Thanks for your comments, everyone! I tried to keep it on topic for the challenge. Glad y'all are enjoying it!! xo

THANK YOU to everyone that voted for my story. 4.86 is a respectable finish, and I'm proud of it and that I kept it on the challenge topic. XO

Great story! Well done!

I'm glad I finally got a chance to read your entry. Now I'll have to read the other one.

Great job, thanks for sharing your work!

Very good. I wasn't impressed with the first story of yours that I read, but this one worked for me. For me, I have to care about the characters, be able to put myself in the story; in my mind replace one of the characters with myself. I have found that's hard to do in a short story; I guess that's why I write longer ones. I'll keep reading.