by IJS0904
I started this and thought she was going to get taken and used.
I loved where it went and hope there will be a follow up.
Lovely fantasy. Not sure it would ever work out this perfectly, but I’d like to hope it would!
Well written, I'd have liked a bit more reluctance in the early sections but that's just me. Bill got into the program very quickly.
Loved that you showed the conversations and that mistakes happened too.
There was one section the morning after Stacey had the 2 guys that you mixed up Andria and Alicia using the names interchangeably. (Always give characters very different names.)
In all a great story no idea why it's not getting more votes.
An excellent read….this is exactly the kind of story that finds its way onto my Favorites list. I can see myself going back to this one again. Having had an open relationship in the past, open and honest communication is the key. You really brought that out in this story and the sex scenes you painted in our minds were amazing. 5 stars, my friend, and well deserved. Look forward to reading your other works.
Strangely wholesome, I'm not even hard anymore, I just finished the reading for the story. Spielberg needs to hear about this.
Great story and fantasy but in reality involving feelings with other people you are swinging with leads down a very dangerous path ...we know have been there but still married for 20 years next month!
It was a nice story, I feel that there was too much falling in love for this story to get my motor running, but it was a good read. I hate the phrase “making love” I have been married for 30 years and we love each other deeply, but we both enjoy dirty, nasty fucking.