All Comments on 'Billion Dollar Slaves 01 Ch. 08-09'

I would to see it finished. I have enjoyed it so far.

Loved the story, i just wish there was more in each chapter...

I could take it or leave it. It is well written but the cruelty of your characters astounds me. I understand the perverse pleasure in pain, but you don't explain the pleasure very well. I only know the characters are pleased after you (the writer) tell me they are pleased. And we all know writers lie. There is no feeling except the pain in your descriptions. Only when they thank the Master or Mistress do I feel they are satisfied, and even then, I'm not sure it's not just a programed response.

What I would like is a description of the pain/pleasure these women are feeling. It seems you see them as objects, not as human.

I can tell you are a cruel man. I cannot tell you if I would read another installment of this story or not. I would like to see how it ends, but it seems more of a horror story to me than erotica.

the bottom of the food chain

great please carry on

Dear readers,

Please remember this is a work of fiction, as such my characters do things that would never be allowed in real life.

I in real life am a practicing dungeon master. I teach SSC, dungeon monitoring and after care classes.

That being said your feedback on my character development and adding more to the slaves side in regards to how they feel and react has been noted and appreciated and I will in the future try to get more into the (head) so to speak of the victims.

THANKS

Dom Woolf

Each chapter just gets hotter.

Awesome. Keep it, and us UP!

Spot on,gave my slave immense pleasure as we tried some of ur stories

Excellent series I hope ther will be many more

many thanks fot your work

You are a "sick" dude, but I can't stop reading them. Please keep them coming

dude, keep writing and we'll keep reading.. awesome stuff thanks

Hope to get some nice fisting action soon.