All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 02'

i hope we can read ch. 03 soon.

Kind Author,

Another rock n roll example of pure fun and entertainment:

"Cindy flipped back a page on the computer's browser, "Tonight's ball is to benefit Doctors Without Borders International. The attendees are the high rollers of society in the state, not just the city. My God, Bon Jovi is performing as part of the entertainment ... and then Billy Joel. Wow! This is a really serious high-end event." She jabbed her finger at the screen, "Look! It's $15,000 a seat minimum."

Actually, some of the fault is Elsa's. She had his drivers license, and never did the minimum research she should have done before ever going out with him. It didn't take long once Cindy started to look him up.

EH, got me hooked so I will keep reading this "Lifetime" movie script. Agree with below comment about her cell's caller ID shortening his name, just a computer error, LOL. Really though, what woman would turn down an evening like this and then demand an explanation?

Got to read more.

You're talented writer. I would appreciate the opportunity of further editing. There were a few minor opportunities missed. I've copied this comment in case I need to paste it in further stories.