All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 100'

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dozendozenalmost 7 years ago
Still going strong. *****

A trivial criticism: "By far, Tori out shown them in so many ways..." Surely you meant "By far, Tori out shone them in so many ways...".

cudsnuggleatcudsnuggleatover 5 years ago
We both sincerely say YES

With writing such as this example:

" 'Very. Every girl should have a double strand natural pearl necklace and matching earrings. Diamonds at eighteen might be a little over the top on most occasions, but pearls are always in fashion and they go with just about anything. Also, don't worry, because when the time is right, I do believe you'll see the diamonds again, only you won't have to borrow them from your 'sisters' because they'll be yours.' "

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Did I miss the chapter with the birthday party??

hairyheadhairyhead7 days ago

It links from chapter 9 to Chapter 100!!

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...