All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 22'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
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Please add more women to the group.

Some potential new members could include...

Melanie's former roommate & KC's 3 artist friends who rent space from her in her gallery.

HamsterHamsterover 7 years ago
Too Much of a Good Thing

Well, I got to Chapter 19 before I had to call it quits. The story has strayed to far from any reality that I can even imagine. Every fantasy has to be anchored in reality as its departure point and this series has left that anchor too far behind. All there is left is gratuitous interludes that are not believable enough to keep me going. Time to fold this tent and try something else.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...