All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 79'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

fucking boring as shit doesnt cover it. youve only had maybe three good chapters out of the last thirty. any chance you could gut maybe 99% of your useless characters and focus on the title characters instead. porn stars and orgies every other chapter wore thin after you first introduced both. it was implied with a pregnancy you were going to tone down elsas involvement in these pointless flings.

mammoetmammoetabout 7 years ago
not that bad, but.

I'm following the story since ch.1 and loved the story but the last few chapters there are way to many people mentioned by name that it becomes confusing to read, the who's who list is just getting too long, on top of that there was a story in here some where but the never ending swap parties are overpowering that way too much and i'm sorry to say i'm starting to get bored a bit too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Yea agree.

A billionaire porn star is not believable due to the risks to his business credibility. And Elsa is psychotic being willing to fuck any cock that crosses her path. Mark does not have to really worry about competition because she finds a new world's greatest hunk every weekend. I don't see how she can possible remember all the guys she has fucked. And this just when you think she is going to become a little more normal after becoming pregnant. I just skimmed through this one as it is becoming stale. 2*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Dear Anonymous

If this story is so boring, why have you read SEVENTY NINE FUCKING CHAPTERS????? Go get a life. // Another Anon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
time to let it die

OMG let it go already.

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