All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 97'

Wouldn't the NTSB be all over that plane before anyone was allowed to move it?

Can you finish this rubbish at chapter 100 - bored with it now

(Was a long time ago actually)

No one is forcing Magnum?????? to keep on reading it.

This story has gone on far too long. Should have ended about 90 chapters ago. Kill it already.

However does a porn story require research?

If this story is this long and requires a synopsis every 10 chapters, that's not writing, it's typing.

Best chapter in the series. 5* This one and chapter where Elsa got shot. The only bad chapters were where Elsa went out to find strange and the drag them back to be in the group. Elsa then was so disgusting I almost dropped this. Those I didn't read as this doesn't fit in at all with the rest of the stories about incorporating new wives.

Very good job by the author on actually doing the research to make this event very realistic as well as conveying Elsa's state of mind.

Don't listen to the haters. I really enjoyed reading your story and I hope you continue your expiration of these characters. I hope that you keep writing for your own enjoyment and the enjoyment of others. Remember, if they don't want to read it they don't have to click on the link!

Just buy a new one, it's not like Mark cannot afford it.

As a pilot I believe that the safest landing would be achieved with all three wheels fully retracted. Rollout would be the smoothest and less prone to cartwheeling resulting in a fireball.

Landing with an asymmetrical landing gear condition, hard on the left gear for the purpose of shaking the right gear into the down position is unrealistic as the right gear would not have enough time to extend and lock.

Flying near or beyond the speed of sound (Mach 1) for the purpose of blowing off the landing gear doors is unrealistic as the Citation is not designed for transonic/supersonic flight.

The whole emergency was blown way out of proportion and unrealistic.

I have not read the entire "Billionaire and the Sisters" series, but the airplane crash in this chapter appears to be a direct copy of crash in the "Temporary Girlfriend: Wedding Ch. 01", by Romantic1. If you are not the same author, you really should not plagiarize.

As a pilot, and I am pretty sure you are.....you can't move a crashed aircraft until the ntsb say to move it......just saying for the next story you write.....this is one of the best I have read so far.....

I believe Romantic1, TLCgiver and this author are the same.