by DonnasDream
Had me recall my own virginity lost to a much older family member, related to my mom. In fact incestuous then. She was married to an absent husband and in lust for a young boy. I was privelaged . . .
Another hot powerful encounter of a hungry talented woman taking a young virgin lover. The mature lady taking the boy and skillfully draining him to meet her own needs is one of the most erotic encounters of which I have read. Please continue your writing,,,your talent is without limit !!
I love how Always Ready she is! :+))
Another to-the-point sharing!
I appreciate how you keep your stories
to the situation at hand.
Not turning them into an artificial touching-all-positions inventory.
This is quite good, short but interesting right from the start. Good rhythm and pacing. He's not a jerk. She's a nice woman. A nice couple. I hope you let us know soon what happens next.
a "warm Saturday night"....with a "February chill".......Good story line with great possibilities, if a bit unoriginal, but needs some work here and there because it takes away any erotic subtlty.