All Comments on 'Bimbo Builder Academy Ch. 02'

Those tags may fit the story as a whole, but not really this chapter, as far as I can tell. It'd be better to have tags that imply the slow buildup that seems to be happening instead.

The author is really good at writing sex scenes. I liked the contrast in the enthusiasm between Natalie and his girlfriend. It's good that the female characters in the story have distinct personalities. Though Natalie's personality may have been a result of hypnosis.

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attended his own academy.

Two chapters into this story and I still have no idea why it's posted as a mind control story. Also, I lost my 'suspension of disbelief' when the female student grabbed the teacher by the balls and started squeezing. That entire scene was too out of place to really feel real. Up until this point, Natalie was the only student asking questions. Thus, this other student had no logical reason to say that the teacher was "playing favorites".

Also, the Professor is acting like a shy 14 year old rather than an adult in a class full of students.

I looked for 'Blade of Innocence' ... didn't find it.

all right...