All Comments on 'Bimbo Builder Academy Ch. 04'

Hi! JC here. I really hope you enjoyed chapter four in the Bimbo Builder Academy!

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It was a great chapter. Loved the shower sex. Hope to see more sex between the couple.

Hey JC, wow that was an awesome read! Good gosh. It's a brain teaser that's psychotically erotic. Thoroughly enjoying the twists and the erotica, very well versed. It's rare that a story would keep me antsy for the next release. And this one did just that! Can't wait to read the continuation and find out the juicy conclusion. Well done JCBeleren, definitely worth entry to the hall of fame.

The sex scenes are outstanding. Something is obviously going on with Jules as well, and I suspect you're going to bring those things together in the end. Should be an interesting ride.

Love reading all of your stuff, cant wait to read the next chapter!! Any chance we can get you to continue Trance.inc?

Wow! Hot shower sex with the girlfriend. I did have a small suggestion based on my personal taste for the first chapter. In the first chapter, I would have preferred if the starting sequence was in its proper chronological order. Personally, I don't like the format of first introducing a scene and then going back in time to explain how we got there. It feels like a spoiler. The same thing happened in Chapter 3 with Lena slapping her father and then the chapter going back in time. But the slapping incident is not expained until now. Maybe the protagonist had his memory of the incident erased. Other than that, it has been a perfect journey.

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Nicely done, JCB!

I'm afraid my spelling Nazi was triggered on page 1 of chapter 4. You have "LudicSpecs" and "LucidSpecs" in adjacent paragraphs.

My apologies if I'm the 294th person to tell you this.

you write so well...

ok, but it's late and i'm sleepy...