by JCBeleren
Well done! Your best in quite some time.
Now please let's find out what in the Sam Hell is going on!?!?
Your doing great so far, keep it up. Really looking foreword to Mitch getting the upper hand, can't wait to see how it all works out.
I could feel the tension build this entire chapter. It made the sex scene even better and has me very intrigued on where the plot is going. Bravo good sir and write with God's speed.
Very good writing. You do an excellent job of being descriptive, yet leaving enough to the imagination that I can paint my own picture. The character interactions are realistic, their actions and reactions are genuine. The little kinks thrown in are just enough spice to keep things interesting, too. Carry on!
Interesting premise, well written, intriguing progression.
This series gets hotter and hotter as it continues, really great work and the mystery is moving toward its reveal in a way which keeps things interesting but doesn't detract from the sexual heat.
I can hardly wait for the next chapter. The mysteries are finally coming to light.
Put his specs on and be like "Oh Mr St John, come in. On your knees..."
All the time reading I am thinking, "what about the girlfriend?" Also what did he figure out in the end?
Part of the puzzle is solved. There are still many questions. And where is the girlfriend?
You can help me...
Hey! It's JC, and I'm here to ask for your professional support.
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With much love,
JC