All Comments on 'Bimbo Builder Academy Ch. 07'

This is excellent work. Your protagonist is a proper three-dimensional character with a clear (if substantially compromised) sense of right and wrong and a lot of the intrigue in this story comes from the conflict between conscience and the bizarre situation he finds himself in. Where other authors might revel in the lewd possibilities presented by that situation, you've taken the harder (but much more satisfying) route of keeping true to your main character and making his moral struggle an integral part of the story. The result is very compelling.

Plus, you *are* a damn fine writer! 😀 But, this is the best of your stories so far. I'm impressed.

I'm very excited for how this is going to end. Another excellent chapter.

Why does he need to break up with his girlfriend? If he cares about her and she is potentially in danger of becoming a mindslave to the academy, then he should be able to tell her honestly what is happening. His NDA might prevent him from talking about the academy itself, but it should not have an effect on telling her about the current triggers, as well as the connection to her therapist.

I have been enjoying your writing style, the manner in which you develop the characterizations, and the unexpected twist at the end of this chapter.

Good work. Hope that you continue it!

This is going great. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I liked this one. I have added you to my favourite authors and I am always delighted when I receive the notification that you have uploaded another installment of one of your stories.

I am definately ready for our math professor to man up and take charge instead of being an indecisive victim. He also needs to quit lying to himself that everything is ok and start worrying more and be proactive about his suspicions.

Looks like Mitch is finally taking responsibility for his actions. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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Real page turner like when I binge watched Breaking Bad.

He was in pajama bottoms and his suit jacket, then he put his wallet in his pocket?

You SERIOUSLY need an editor

Not just a proofreader, AN EDITOR

getting near the end...