by JCBeleren
Is it weird that I’m hoping for more heartache for his ex? It’d be interesting to see her desperately competing with someone bound to his will for attention
Your writing is, as always, wonderful. With all the plot advancement in this and the previous chapter, I look forward to seeing where things will lead... and as much as I feel for these poor, brainwashed women, I hope we'll get some more ridiculously sexy action in the future, as well.
Julia going to the Principal for answers and him taking her... That would be a fun take, right?
The leaving of girlfrind is confusing and pushed. It doesnt make for a good story because it doesnt come across as genuine
Can not wait to read the other chapters!! But Mitch is a bit of a f@#$ing idot lol
I have some complaints about the way he dealt with his girlfriend. He should have warned her about the Academy and about her therapist. I hope he didn't put her in danger by breaking up with her.
You can help me...
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I was loving this story up until the point where he wants to break up from Julia. That simply didn't seem right at all, and made no sense to me.