All Comments on 'Bimbo Stories: Helen Tracy'

...that was certainly... *different*.

Would love to see more of how he uses his bimbo daughter

awful. Write no more.

I happen to really like it and would love for this chapter to be continued. I hope you will do it. Job well done!!

It was like you were in.a rush to finish but the conflict in 'James' mind was thrilling.

your mind is fucked up. i fucking loved it. my mind is fucked up

only thought is using a different name, bucket isn't that sexy.

your's truly, A. Nonymous

Please write a sequel

I agree the conflict James was experiencing was the best part of the story. That should be co tinued in a sequel.

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You made me a male Bimbo while i was reading this. I got totaly mind controlled by your story and got so amazingly horny and came loads you cant even begin to imagine. My brain shut down totaly down and i was just a dick on legs. Keep it up!

i luv tuching myself 2 this. wuld luv 2 hear it from buckets POV

.. a first for me. Never knew this sort of fetish even existed.

I really love this story but I feel like I was waiting for him to fuck his.bimbo daughter and then I got let down. You just sort of ended it right at the part I was waiting for. Maybe do an extended cut.

Why would you stop right before the most interesting part?

I usually write stories to get myself off. So I probably got off at that point!

I liked the story a lot. Could have had a bit more fleshing out around how far his boss transformed but overall I liked the pace and the content. Set up some exposition for the Bimbo Stories series that's nice but still a bit mysterious. I look forward to more stories of a similar vein.

could have expanded the daughters role in to another chapter

If you like this kind of stuff, this is the bomb. Loved it. I agree it could easily have had more content but I think the focus is on James and his daughter, and it makes sense to focus on them. Very excited to see more stories revolving around this fictional town.

This really should have a part 2

Love the dialogue, a lot of authors don't get that right,. Yes, keep going, have him take her to the mall, have her fuck his friends, etc.

Oh My Word!!! This is the Funniest sex story I've ever read in my LIFE...whether you wrote it that way or not! 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Absolutely love your story. It's soooo fucking weird but engaging and funny as hell. You might actually be an unrecognised genius. Is there a follow up? C'mon I have to know, who was the weird guy in the Edwardian costume? A vampire? The devil?