by lindas969
It took a little work but I actually loved this story. You really should look into getting an editor though to smooth the grammar and spelling out.
But the storyline itself was great and I'd love to read a sequel, maybe even a series as you get more confident. I also checked your biography and would love to hear about your other college experiences assuming that part was serious.
Keep writing but get help and I hope to read more soon! Finally, that's a nice pic. :o)