All Comments on 'Bird Watching'

by JaneTheDomme

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yowseryowseralmost 5 years ago
Sweet tale

Raw, immediate, descriptive. Outdoorsy sex always a pleasure.

"I don't consider myself bi-sexual" - always a dangerous admission.

Lovely.

maddictmaddictalmost 5 years ago

Little red head riding hood, you sure are looking good, think your husband can spot a jaybird.

I'd like to think I would "(!)"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Excellent

Very hot story and I enjoyed it tremendously.

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 5 years ago
not bad

But I think the cougars need to be watching out for her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Who's hunting whom?

Nicely developed. Cougar ending tied things together nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Enjoyable!

The cougar might enlist the help of a proof reader!

Nicely done, though.

Only_connectOnly_connectabout 2 years ago

Writing style not exactly sparkling, but a fun and exciting scenario.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Ugh. Pee and a humorless joke.

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