All Comments on 'Birds and Bees'

This story is such a treasure. Great premise, lots of laughs, slow burn, and a happy ending makes for a satisfying read. Congratulations!

Definitely wanted more

Great job

Stopped read after the first paragraph...

Perfect! I don't think I've ever laughed during a story on this site quite like I did with this one. I think I just might have a new favorite story.

no matter what anyone says you did great enjoyed it so much!

Thank you so much! You're extremely talented. Please write more stories.

Great story. I loved it.

It had everything from drama to real romance and you even spiced it up with a fair bit of humour. I thoroughly enjoyed it and really look forward to more of the same from you in the future. A pure 5*

KI read the whole story, and I'm still waiting for it to heat up.

That was fantastic. Very heart-warming. I even felt myself get choked up a little, I'm not too proud to admit. Keep up the good work!

Great story, very well done, and I loved the happy ending. Five Stars.

5 Stars. Thank you for some great read. Hope there is a sequel. Thanks

Pretty Damn spectacular.

Fantastic story, I loved it immensely. Please write some more like this.

Great story with nice ending. I look forward to more from this author 😊

Amazing story, would love to read more about them in the future.

Another good one!! Glad to see you're still writing! As always, looking forward to more.

great

By accident I found this treasure of a story and found myself engrossed in it's content. The love that these two siblings felt for each other was incredible.

Firstly, much enjoyed the story. However, call me an old fuddy-duddy from the prehistoric pre-internet era, but Rhiannon is all bent out of shape about Benji not having tried to find her. The glaring disconnect is that she knew the entire time where Benji was, and a letter or postcard via old-fashioned snail mail would have had then connected within days. When she was yanked from their home she would have been fully aware of her brother’s modus operandi, that he was not an internet-savvy guy. The story would have been even stronger if this issue had been addressed.

That was a fantastic story! There were so many moving scenes as well as some genuinely funny moments. Thanks for the best story I've read this year!

way too bucolic in tone for my taste, but the story is sweet.

I have been on this site for years and this definitely is my favorite story I have read thank you very much sir

This is the best stories that I've ever read on Literotica.

Man I wish I could pay you what you deserve for giving me this experience. I find myself wandering back to the mental scenery your story has produced for me. The romance, the genuinely funny parts, the whole dynamic between the characters... Jeez. Congratulations, you're a very talented writer.

Nice story, and some reeeally pleasant humour ( I'm English so I gets to spel "humour" proper!)

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Nice story. The pace is a little choppy, but it was still a pleasant read.

This was really sweet, I enjoyed it immensely. I cried with laughter and I enjoyed the emotional connection of the characters

Incredible and beautiful story. I had so much fun reading it that I'm lucky no one was able to hear me laughing.

This was really nice. Keep 'em coming.

A great read, had a great build up, sad, and humorous all rolled in to one honeycomb. There were times that I laughed out loud! I also liked that you didn't feel the need to over emphasize their measurements, never said he was hung like a horse, only mentioned her beauty.

Wow Thanks!!!.

Lovely story. That’s two of yours now that I’ve absolutely loved. You build the story well, develop your characters and then get going. Fantastic work, well done

FANTASTIC story!!!!

I was laughing hard at points (no pun intended)

What a wonderful love story. Great character development and great story with a happy ending. I hate stories that end with "they fucked - the end". I'm so glad that you gave us so much more. I loved this 'years down the road' ending. Added you and the story to my favorites.

They had the chicken, pig and bees but did they get married. Definitely deserves more than 5 stars.

This story was so compelling, and really dragged you into it. Only problem I had was the pig being a pet haha. Other than that it was a great read

Great story but it was too short! I also think that you shouldn’t shy away from saying cock or pussy, etc. The clinical terms just weren’t hot at all.

Definitely one of the best I've come across here. A second part would be awesome! Keep up the good work.

The second story of yours that I've read.

I was sorry to see it end.

Please keep up the great, imaginative, grammatically correct stories.

Nicely done. Only a few errors made themselves known, the worst being when Ben is kissing Rhiannon with increasing "rigor" instead of "vigor" is the one that stood out most. I believe the intent was to convey increasing passion.

Thanks for sharing. Added to favorites. 5* Slainté

Just completed it till 3rd page and it's too good and even funny

Names are awful. Can't do it.

Cute, romantic, beautiful.

10/10!!!!!

Clicked expecting to read a hot story with richly realized characters.

Was blown away by on-screen descriptions of barnyard acrobatics.

Five stars, a chef's kiss, and a chicken riding proudly atop a pig.

Read this while I had the song playing.

Second time through, better than ever.

What a warm and loving tale, well written with a beautiful storyline. I just wish it was longer,at any rate this love story deserves a 5++++++ star vote. Well done.

A good story but you made the brother sister characters seem dysfunctional and dumb!!!

Really good story but you wrote them out like trailer park trash

No current update on the bitch mother and her boyfriend!!

Lion, nicely done. 'Basics done well - full AND likeable characters, dialogue consistent w/ the subcultures, pace had no fluff or dead spots. 'Particularly like the treatment of culture. 'No cliches - just people. 'Predictable, but that was known when we open the page. Well done - and the rating shows it. 'Congrats

-Dreaded Anonymous

That was a really nice story, from start to finish. You did a really nice job on this story. Thank you for sharing it.

this is absolutly the funniest story on this site - any time I need a good laugh I read it. Thanks :)

brilliant, I'm having visions of someone trying to toilet train a chicken. A well crafted story, likeable characters

Nice plot and hot sex talks

Fucking really, getting a pet pig, was this an attempt of humour, if so, it was crap!! Like the pet chicken!!

Good story with trailer park trash humour, living conditions, etc!! Being such a filth and he sells food stuff

Wonderful story, especially the title...

First time in a long time I had to pause mid read. The chicken coop set up straight up broke me I laughed so hard. I love the genuine humor between these two, bar none. All of the dialogue I enjoyed pretty much. As far as characters go, I would gladly read a series with these two. I probably should've been weirded out by the farm stuff, but it made sense for him. Intentional or not, I also applaud you for that. I'll probably come back to this story before long.

For me the Pig didn’t go down well with me, a dog would’ve be more appropriate especially a working dog being a farm. Other than that brilliant. Still I gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Funniest story i have ever read on literotica, just brilliant.

"could we be more of a hillbilly stereotype right now?"

Lovely story, extremely well written, near pissed myself laughing.

Thanks.

(6/27/2023) Funny and sweet and an enjoyable read. Pretty good cell and internet service there. But it would have been funny if he had had to climb a telephone pole and use a Butt-in set to make phone calls. Still, five stars.

You do very good work. So good I've rationed out reading your pieces, because once they're gone it's back to browsing through mostly mediocre jerk off fodder. Do appreciate you putting yours up.

This was really great. Thank you for writing and sharing.

I actually really liked the ending of this story. Not enough authors show what comes after the “happily ever after” so it really made me happy to know that they did get married and have kids.

Quite entertaining read with creative humor.

Complements on the ending.

Lost me with the honey sex bit, skimmed through that but continued reading afterwards 10/10